I like the punchy phrases! I think t adds depth to it. Well done!

Lovely. I love you you started on the first stanza. (Okay, sounds kinda silly but what I mean is I love how your first stanza is worded.) And the way you ended the poem with "Joy of innocence" is fanominal. This could be a real hit in about 50 years(considering Chaucer and Tennyson didn't even get to see their work become popular when they were alive.)^_^