That was intense...I was never in your postion but I know what you are going thru... my cousin is going thru the same thing.... she told me all about it.... anyway great job...

Wow lucy. this is an amazing poem. it's so deep and heart breaking but so descriptive. great job hun. hope everything is ok for you. *hugs*

Wow that was so powerful, amazing job. you could feel all of your emotions just pouring out, beautiful job.

I really like this poem!

Pretty long but written very well. 5/5