I wish you knew

by Ambar   Jul 5, 2007


I thought we meant forever
I guess I was wrong
I still wonder where I failed
Why you just played along

You did what you had to
I don't blame you for my pain
I just wish it hadn't been me
Stuck in memory lane

I tried to ignore your thoughts
I tried to go far away
Only to find myself
Closer in every way

I won't let you go so easy
We can't just be friends
Won't you give me a chance
Coz this can't be where it ends

I did all I could
To try to get you back
Instead I just lost
Whatever left I had

I'll wait for the day
You find your way to me
We're meant for each other
I hope you'll finally see.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kurt

    As is previously stated by everyone else, this is an extraordinary poem. The emotions displayed are easily related to and provide the reader with a tangible feeling. Great write 5/5.

    --Kurt--

  • 17 years ago

    by Karen

    GREAT!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow. Flow was good, good choice of words. keep it up!

    We're meant for each other
    I hope you'll finally see.
    ^^ I feel the same in those two lines.. Well done my friend. That ending was perfect!

    5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    I for one can totally relate to this poem. Great job.. keep them coming.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I thought this poem was very well-written. It had a nice flow and good wording. Very good work. Keep it up. xx Chrissie

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