Comments : I wish you knew

  • 17 years ago

    by amber

    This poem is amazing! The flow is great.. and rhymes stand out. Good Job!

    I can't wait till you put more up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem , well written and vocabulary was good, I know the feeling , can relate in many ways, wonderful write , keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I thought this poem was very well-written. It had a nice flow and good wording. Very good work. Keep it up. xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    I for one can totally relate to this poem. Great job.. keep them coming.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow. Flow was good, good choice of words. keep it up!

    We're meant for each other
    I hope you'll finally see.
    ^^ I feel the same in those two lines.. Well done my friend. That ending was perfect!

    5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karen

    GREAT!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kurt

    As is previously stated by everyone else, this is an extraordinary poem. The emotions displayed are easily related to and provide the reader with a tangible feeling. Great write 5/5.

    --Kurt--