I walk the line

by pandora   Jul 5, 2007


I went for a walk on this blustery day.
I walk alone.
wind whipping my face.
eyes stinging from the shear force of the gale.

no summer zephyr
no light breezes
this wind demands your respect.

trees snapping
signs blowing off their posts
howling mad
this wind expects you to understand its power

I walk alone.
the pain of the cold pushes through my coat.
The chill hits my body.
I walk alone.

The wind will also know to respect me.

I walk alone.
The cold hits my teeth
they begin to chatter with conviction
I walk the line alone.

This wind will respect me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by pandora

    Wow. thank you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This poem held exceeding beauty within your words. Though the wind was used to portray an individual, I took it as life's challenges at the beginning. When I reread and read this piece again, I find myself utterly mesmerized by this piece. It simply was a thoughtful and lovely love poem.

    Best wishes,
    Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the ending and the imagery in this piece.
    Whole poem is greatly written, and I like it from the beginning to the the end.
    Well done, 5/5