I like the ending and the imagery in this piece.
Whole poem is greatly written, and I like it from the beginning to the the end.
Well done, 5/5

This poem held exceeding beauty within your words. Though the wind was used to portray an individual, I took it as life's challenges at the beginning. When I reread and read this piece again, I find myself utterly mesmerized by this piece. It simply was a thoughtful and lovely love poem.

Best wishes,
Marian

Wow. thank you.