Stephanie(acrostic)

by Stephanie Naylor   Jul 5, 2007


So many guys take advantage of me
Telling there friends I groveled and begged for it
Every time i fell like i am fulfilling my duty to Satan
Phones ringing
Hells calling saying times up and i have to go back
Again I ask for a little more time
Never again must you ask says he
I know i will always get my way
Every time, cause i know daddy loves me

----------------------------------------------------------------- ok i had my friend read this and they thought that it was the DADDY, that was taking advantage of her in the story, but no SATAN is her dad

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Quite and odd but interesting piece, to portrayed The devil as the daddy was some what chilling, morbid and creepy.. None the less it was a great piece which I did enjoy much better then the other one of yours I read and I expecially liked the style behid it. Well done on writing such a powerful piece. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Apparatus

    I don't know if it's just me, but i can't seem to figure out what exactly you are talking about.
    I'm thinking one thing, but then again it seems like another.

    But, well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very unique way of putting in Satan..
    I was thinking something like,
    before I read the little note you left behind.
    Though, that did clear up matters on hand.
    Anyway, this poems depth was wonderful.
    You really know how to write.
    The flow was swift, not damaging.
    Your words left for after-thought.
    Lovely job on this one.
    Overall Rating: 5.0/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought it was the father to...maybe make that clearer somehow?
    I liked this, the only thing I didn't like was that it seemed to be more of a story in places than poetry.
    other than that however, I found it to be intense and now I know for sure that it was Satan, the ending is stunning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another unique yet wonderful poem.... i've also been thinking about doing the same with my name...very good job!

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