This one is your best of yours. Wording is excellent and atmosphere its funny and great. Well done. Superb acrostic poem which deserves 5/5.

Interesting write, very unique.
I like the wording and the topic.
Good acrostic, 5/5.

Thats very good.. well done

Great job writing an acrostic. (Rem, this is coming from someone who never worte one. LOL) Anyway, love the word choice.

Fave lines:

Every time i fell like i am fulfilling my duty to Satan
Phones ringing
Hells calling saying times up and i have to go back

It was a great poem, flow was smooth, I like the opening line it grabs the readers attention. Just a suggestion to capitalize the 'I' xD

5/5!

Acrostics are hard, but you pulled tis one of well. i dont think it was your best, but i couldnt see anything you could change to make it better. keep it up
xxxxx

I thought the daddy was taken advantage too *embarased* but it was good ive been thinking of doing the same with my name you have sperred me on well done...

Another unique yet wonderful poem.... i've also been thinking about doing the same with my name...very good job!

I thought it was the father to...maybe make that clearer somehow?
I liked this, the only thing I didn't like was that it seemed to be more of a story in places than poetry.
other than that however, I found it to be intense and now I know for sure that it was Satan, the ending is stunning.

Very unique way of putting in Satan..
I was thinking something like,
before I read the little note you left behind.
Though, that did clear up matters on hand.
Anyway, this poems depth was wonderful.
You really know how to write.
The flow was swift, not damaging.
Your words left for after-thought.
Lovely job on this one.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

I don't know if it's just me, but i can't seem to figure out what exactly you are talking about.
I'm thinking one thing, but then again it seems like another.

But, well written.

Quite and odd but interesting piece, to portrayed The devil as the daddy was some what chilling, morbid and creepy.. None the less it was a great piece which I did enjoy much better then the other one of yours I read and I expecially liked the style behid it. Well done on writing such a powerful piece. ~mel