A cute poem. a joy to read. Great work

This has almost a song quality to it. Very well written, it starts out with pain and sadness and the second stanze has more optimsm, hope. Excellent poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow, this is another breath- taking, amazing peace. The first stanza is my favorite. You are great poet, and all of your poems are really great.
5/5 from me.

Once again the words in your poem have truly touched my heart. I fully understand the emotion and appreciate the message the poems sends. well done

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.