Woah! I really like your work. I don't really know exactly what I like about it but your definetly going into my favourites.
"Happiness seems out of reach
for far to many people."
Those 2 lines spoke to me so much. Awesome work once again.
And a much deserved 5/5
.x

No tonly is this poem well written, but its also incredibly true, which makes me genuinly like it. 5/5 xxx

To = too.
I like it, and I agree with every line.
You wrote is excellently, and it holds meaningful message.

-Happiness seems out of reach
for far to many people.

They just sit their watching
and doing absolutely nothing.-
^ This is so true.
Great job, keep up! 5/5

Happiness seems out of reach
for far to many people.

These lines are so deep and meaningful. Great, short-to-the-point poem!
Keep up the good work!

I love that, it was really good. and so very true, people work work and work, and then in a split second their life is over.
Very good poem !

5/5

"time passes by [to] fast." - too.

Though Time seemingly passes by too fast, methinks that it provides sufficient allowance for us. It all depends upon how we use our time economically, or uneconomically. A nice read, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.

`Marian