Just Because

"You tell me I am pretty, you tell me I am yours
But you lie to me and kill me, Break my heart into two."

I can relate to this.
But I don't really get the message of this poem.
I think this poem would come out good when you revise it (:

<3

Good job

Mind-blowing...

One of the common poems i read and it was such a cliche. but still i like it coz the emotions were there and these lines just reveal it:

"No one really cares for me.
Yes my family and friends do
But the ones whom I want
Don't even look twice at me

I just try my hardest
For someone to look at me
And make this pain disappear
But I am just invisible

Like my whole life, I have always been clear.
I don't like it anymore I want out of this nightmare
Can't tell you how much I care because I don't anymore
You tell me I am pretty, you tell me I am yours
But you lie to me and kill me, Break my heart into two.

So I end this poem on that note telling you I don't really care
Because you were there and now your not
That is the story of my life
Just trying to make it all work"

nothing more to say just o keep it up

As much as you thought it sucked, it doesn't it was well written, you can see the emotions in it, it was sad, yet it was nicely done, i loved the way it is now, great work. 5/5