Times of old

by deathdealer   Jul 5, 2007


I remember your face
it would brighten up my day
make me so happy
i could never look away

i remember your smile
it would make me stare
look at you for a while
all the time being lost in space

i remember your love
your soothing touch
your welcoming embrace
those moments
i could never displace

now i look back
back to when i first met you
that magical day
what happened?
what drove you away?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    This is so cute I love it. I love how a guy can be so sensitive. I feel like you really miss this girl. And sorry I haven't been on latly to read your stuff. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmie

    5/5
    great job
    i loved it

    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I loved the poem. It was nice how you showed the love and emotion and the longing and wondering for it being suddenly lost.

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