by Liz Jul 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I see and always cry |
by Fear2love
The repeatin of words actully help the poems, purrect poem:] |
WOW...So beautiful :) I love it ! Keep it up:) |
by SuperJenius
That was beautiful! After the second stanza I found myself trying to guess what the "never" of each line would be and I would always guess incorrectly, which is great because that means (to me) that the poem was not cliche or predictable. Great Job! |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow!!! fantastic, i love it, keep it up !!!! |