Wow!!! fantastic, i love it, keep it up !!!!

That was beautiful! After the second stanza I found myself trying to guess what the "never" of each line would be and I would always guess incorrectly, which is great because that means (to me) that the poem was not cliche or predictable. Great Job!

WOW...So beautiful :) I love it ! Keep it up:)
5/5

The repeatin of words actully help the poems, purrect poem:]