This is a very intense poem that really got its point across

Wow. there was so much hate, i liked it but a few lines i didn't really like, example;
If you were a parent,
I'd kidnapp your child.

but other than that, it was a great poem. 4/5

Very intense and... angry? But the word choice really got the point across and showed the feelings in this piece. Wonderful job and keep up the good work!

If you were a planet,
I'd remove the sun.

Fave lines ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

It was different. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

Very creative piece of poetry. I liked the way you have put the words. All in one 5/5 :)

Fsams