Sad but wonderfully written...it reminds me of a friend of mine...she's not thin yet, but i still see she's not eating...
nice write...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Aww! i love this. you described the situation really well. hun....is this true? please tell me in a message. anyways....nice job....5/5.

Wow a heart felt plea for help...good work ...enjoyable read...5/5 vote and comment on "my doubts" "gifts of sorrow" "arabian sands" thank you

Very well put. 5/5

I'm blown away. The emotion is so raw and real in this poem, and it feels like you put your heart into it. Great job! 5/5