Open your eyes

by dungeonbat   Jul 5, 2007


Open your eyes, By dungeonbat (ts)
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Wondering through fields of doom, my hands
are full of tears of sorrow
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Contemplating death, I hear a voice calling out
to me
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Open your eyes and look at me
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Are you sure you want to leave your life?
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I know this place is not for me, I hate this
strange existence we call life
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The trouble is I thought we'd live forever
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The truth is we were dead before we were born
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I want to escape from this so-called life that
ends in death
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Again I hear voices calling out to me
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Open your eyes and look at me
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If you hate your life, are you sure that your
wish is right?
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Are you sure you want to die?
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You don't know what's waiting for you on
the other side
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Remember if you choose to do so, there is no
way out
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It will be your final journey
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Are you ready to die?
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Open your eyes and look at me
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doomed till death
dungeonbat

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  • 17 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    The truth is we were dead before we were born

    this was my favourite line, mainly because its so true, and a good concept to use, i really enjoyed reading this poem, 5/5 xxx