Eye catching*please dont read if your an eye catcher

by Breeeezie   Jul 5, 2007


Depressed 17 year old
barley passed grade 12
she missed 4 days a week
she walks into class
after being 20 minutes late
students look at her and whisper
the teacher stands up and yells
*late as always and when was
that day you were planning on graduating?*
she gives her a rude face and runs on out
her personal helper at school
forces her to sit and listen
she looks into her desk
whispers *blade*
he smiles and says whats the case?
she smiles and says cant you hear them?
he climbs up her arm
makes long scars
makes rivers full of red down her arm
a student See's something
up and down her arm
but continues to work
she See's red coming out of her sweatshirt
*teacher teacher!!*
this student is bleeding!
she lefts the cutter's sweat arm up
a river of blood comes running out
the teacher goes into shock
little girl how could this happen to you
the cutter stands up
whispers to her blade
*thanks go back to hiding ill finish the rest*
he goes back into her desk
she runs out the school
holding her arm cut together
a trail of blood
follow behind her

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  • 17 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Once i started reading i couldnt stop i had 2 finish it hooked me great job and very emotional

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    Really related i was that girl too. Loved the imagery and idea work. Loved the blades character. Like a little helping and willing smurf. You dont even realise its being bad untill you think about it because its so innocent

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I rly like that its rly good.

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    So much feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    Thats just great