Wow! It reminded me of a real marionette preformance. Great job Danielle. You have become such a great writer!! I Love you and this is a great work! The images are great! Amazing use of words as well!

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Very good poem there Danielle, moving and vivid imagery, reminds me of the song "Symphony of Destruction" by Megadeth. 5/5

Beautiful. Once again, your words have amazed me. They create stunning imagery. You must have put much thought into this.

And thanks for the comment; it brightened up my day, honestly.

It's very deep and well writen...nice piece :)

Excellent!

the style suits to your vocab. the ideas are very powerful. i can feel the thoughts on this one. You have a vast vocab!

keep it up!

Great poem. you have a way with words that make any one with a vivid imagination see it in there head. Awesome job 5/5
-vino