A wish too live life numb

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 5, 2007


Tell me not you love another,
Until I rest within the ground.

Allow me to live life numb, if I must.
And absord the agony as I decay to dust.

For I love you, and love you I must.
For you provide my life force with your hugs.

So please I ask of you too let me live life numb.
And not tell me you love another until I rest within the ground.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Beautiful poem.. I loved it! It's simple really, you just want this person to love you and only you until you die. I feel the same way about a certain someone =) So I can definitely relate to this piece as well.

    5/5 ... Love ya. *Hugs*

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Second stanza is my favorite one. I like form of this piece but I don't like last stanza. This poem is good but it could be better. Atmosphere could be stronger and you could to describe emotions better with more powerful wording.
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    I love your writing. A very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    BEautifully written, excellent word choice and flow, and I could tell many deep emotions were put into it

    I loved the lines

    "Allow me to live life numb, if I must.
    And absord the agony as I decay to dust."

    beautiful. The emotions were so strong.
    Excellent job!

    5/5
    Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    Good job... I like it, the meaning that it stands by... hope to c more work from you.

    Much love and the bests of wishes!

    @!Jezzika!@

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