And absord the agony as I decay to dust.

i think you mean absorb. but i love this line. the use of the aliteration with the A's and D's works well and adds to it's excellence. well done xoxo

Good job... I like it, the meaning that it stands by... hope to c more work from you.

Much love and the bests of wishes!

@!Jezzika!@

BEautifully written, excellent word choice and flow, and I could tell many deep emotions were put into it

I loved the lines

"Allow me to live life numb, if I must.
And absord the agony as I decay to dust."

beautiful. The emotions were so strong.
Excellent job!

5/5
Keep writing!

I love your writing. A very good poem.

Second stanza is my favorite one. I like form of this piece but I don't like last stanza. This poem is good but it could be better. Atmosphere could be stronger and you could to describe emotions better with more powerful wording.
4/5

Beautiful poem.. I loved it! It's simple really, you just want this person to love you and only you until you die. I feel the same way about a certain someone =) So I can definitely relate to this piece as well.

5/5 ... Love ya. *Hugs*

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~