Comments : Behind These Blue Eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is very well written, flows very nicely andc holds great meaning, i loved it, your amazing, ther not alot i would say needs work in fact i love it just the way it is, nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by pretending im over you

    This is a really well written poem. when i was reading this i actually could see this happening between a boy and a girl in my mind. nice job :)!
    <3 julee.