Lovely suicide...

by gorgeous girl   Jul 5, 2007


I bit my lip
and close my eyes
I slide the blade on my wrist
the blood starts to pour
As my head feels light I fall to the floor
my heart was stopping
there was no saving me
a note in my hand saying goodbye
As I take my last breathe
that was the end of me

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  • 17 years ago

    by heartbrk1

    Well shut my mouth

    sounds like something i wood think up

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love to read poems like this. This one was good! <3-Kayla

  • 17 years ago

    by barbara

    I hope you never go through with this because your writing about it is excellent!!! great great job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by pretending im over you

    Thanks for the comment! i really liked this poem..it made me feel as though i was the girl in the poem which i love poems like that! great job!
    -julee

  • 17 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Short, sweet, and straight to the point, i really like poems like this, you have to get alot in just a few lines, and you did it really well 5/5 xx

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