This is an excellent love poem! 5/5

The fact that you employed a poetic form, by way of a traditional vocabulary, is endearing; plus, how you've written this piece in such a classy manner have fairly fascinated me. It's a delicious read. Nicely done, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing! 5/5 ~Marian

Really beautiful Wallace, I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it to be capturing and heartfelt. An amazing structure which was tight. This had something different throughout it. Well done with writing an amazing poems. ~mel

This was a very good poem.... it was awsome.. I liked it.

Tht was rele good....

Hey i realli like it and thanks for the pointer i might just have to use it...no i will

It is one of my favorite poems 5/5
great work i can think of nothing to change.

Very creative and unique, the descriptions in the poem are flawless. Nicely written and so emotional poem.
The third stanza is my favorite.
Well done, great job on this one.

Very beautiful, you have a creative way of writing. A good piece!! Good job, I enjoyed it.

I loved this, it was beautiful and creative. A very good piece that flowed well and was worded so perfectly
love Tara-Kay
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Brilliant poem...i really like the style you used in this one..it was interesting... its something new that i havent read yet...

the flow and rhyming were great and the words you used were so beautiful...5/5 once again.=]

I don't prefer love poetry, this poem is written nicely but it isn't my type of poetry. Repetition of first stanza was very effective.

I love the rhythm and flow of this piece it is written in a way that it captures the reader’s soul.

This was quite beautiful. The flow was flawless. A wonderful triquatrain. 5/5

marcella

Are you really 14? You poerty is just amazing!! Some published pieces I have read are nothing compared to some of your pieces. They truly blow me away. Well done *5/5*

You have a wonderful talent for formed poetry. You pulled this one of beautifully.

I particularly liked how you repeated the first stanza as the last, I thought that made for a powerful effect on the overall piece.

This was a beautiful write and an even greater read.

I love this one, it really shone mainly because im in love lol. I really liked the repetition in it . xxx alex xxx