I think its well written, but rambles at times. you could cut some of these for more powerful lines.
good emotion throughout though. (:

It was again a great poem, good job. I like the rhyming in the poem! keep up the good work I guess you really love your friend ^_^

5/5!

Better than the first one, i think. it was beautiful, showed true love for a friend, shows how much you care. talented piece of writing, flowed well, good imagery
love Tara-Kay
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Awww thats a shame you too have lost out but well written i hope they read it its a poem to change minds :)