Tracy
Very intense piece. How sad. This is so heart wrenching. Life gives us some hard roads to travel it is up to us to make the right choices.
Great job on this write.
Take care Cindy

In life, we must seize the second chances. Making mistakes is a part of life, where we end up down the track, what we amount to is because of what we choose to do. Great poem. 5/5
All the best.

Every second chance is valuable and meaningful...
Very sad piece, full of emotions, but still beautifully written. You can express yourself through your poetry superbly.
Great job, once again 5/5

Hm... If this was a true story, then I feel sorry. Anyway, the poem touches

A very deep and touching poem.

Well you never cease to shock and amaze me. Hell and back again indeed.
I truely belive you were given a second chance for a reason and that you are now doing this positively!
Does cause a lot of pain inside to read it but i am glad you got through these days and they are in the past. Take care.

Kelly
xx