Comments : What I Say

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is a really good piece which i can so easily relate to, it flows so well, and is easy to read. i like the ending lines: 'Cause I'm giving up one you
    I'm giving up on me
    I'm giving up on everything
    That I hold dear to me
    Cause I learned the truth
    That you love then you lose
    So I'm leaving here today
    But you cant hear what I say' i thought these were really powerful and so true to life
    another classically awesome piece!! 5/5
    ali