Another Sad Song

by luv Shelbz luv   Jul 6, 2007


The feelings I have
Are too hard to explain
I am sad and thinking
Of how you've caused me so much pain

I think of how yesterday
We sat and laughed
About nothing really
Was it that bad?

We would sit and talk
For hours or more
You walked in my life
As if it was an open door

That door is now open
But I wish it was closed
So my broken heart would be whole
And no one could impose

Our love is now like a butterfly
We were set free
Because we were now given our wings
If we come back it was meant to be

I sit here now
Just listening to sad songs
I love you still
But know I have to move along.

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  • 17 years ago

    by halie

    Rlly good 5/5 :]
    ~halie~

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Thats a good poem.
    It was sad, but then towards the end you show hope of moving on.
    I loved it.
    keep writing your good, really!
    =]
    5/5
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It lacked as bit of flow but ws otherwise really good 4/5 for good work but not enough flow

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece by you. I think you did a great job on this one. You have one mistake though..

    I am sad and (think)
    Of how you've caused me so much pain
    =thinking - also adding 'ing' enhances the flow =)

    Keep writing my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    A few f the longer lines disrupted the flow a bit. Other than that it was a very nice read. Keep it up! 5/5

    marcella

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