I Love You, Liar

by Erica   Jul 6, 2007


I still can't see you
I don't believe you
There's something wrong with you
You fuking promised
And said "I'm honest"
I put my trust in you

You make my heart sore
It's all you're good for
So throw yourself away
I have no interest
In dirty business
Or words you've got to say

But it's to late now
You know my name now
I owe you half my soul
Yes, I believe you
I won't deceive you
I'm under your control

You always use me
Just to abuse me
Mass murder, rape, and pain
You are my master
You fuking b@stard
I love you, I'm insane

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  • 17 years ago

    by Common Sense

    The first two parts' flow was really shaky, but you made up for it in the end.

    And ...

    'But it's to late now' ... it's too* :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    Oo, really powerful stuff. i liked the structure of it too. and the last line..perfect! -Kiera

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