I LOVED the last verse

***We hate and dont know why
We sin and we dont shy
We are scared but still we lie
Its a curse right from the sky

it really shows humas nature for what it is.
i loved your poem cause it was honest.
great write
5/5

"Nobody can see the scars
Nobody can see that far

Everyday we live just right
While someone is cold in the night"

My favcorite Lines if I had to chose. =]
Honestly, This is very descriptive though the words don't seem to show much of it, I did feel the truth through the words. Miraculous!
I Really Enjoyed this one =]
Keep it up 5/5

-Ally

Wow that is very deep, i still can't believe you wrote this within 20minutes. and yes we human are very....well self centered and very mayger siners. 5/5

How much this write hits close to home. You have summed up the mess we call humankind in these stanzas. Peace, W.