Wow, that was great,!!!
the first two verses were my favorite
we do become addicted to fear and pain. it's strange it like it's all we know so we are afraid to feel any different.
** * cease what you want and want what you get.
priceless line
you my friend are a great writter
keep up the good work!!!:)

I agree!! it was amazing! it was a nice touch to say you had been there, couse they will believe experienced people instead of those who only think. Very nice!5/5

That is so true, i mean we all depend on our fear. and you made another really great poem! 5/5

Well done, and well said. Plenty of morals and lessons in this poem. I am voting for this one 5/5. Walah