by sadeyes Jul 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
How do I face the sunrise |
This poem was superb!!Heartbreaking,emotional and deep!!!!You havr written this very well!!!And you have described your feelings very well!!Good job in this piece!! |
Great poem , full of heart felt emotions , which is understandable , well written and vocabulary was great , you did a marvelous job on this poem and you also expressed your inner feelings very well , great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5 |