by my heads on upside down Jul 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
What is happening to this world that we live in? |
by geeeeee
Great use of alliteration in such a short poem, you used it effectively. You have raised many unanswered questions that I must agree on, may never be answered. |
by Cindy
Nice job! |
Hmm interesting structure but poetic license >> dont know if i used that right :S)) love it :] |