Hmm interesting structure but poetic license >> dont know if i used that right :S)) love it :]

Nice job!

What is happening to this world that we live in?
where shall we all end up?
why have we become the way we are?

So many unanswered questions. I don't know if we will ever get them.
Take Care Cindy

Great use of alliteration in such a short poem, you used it effectively. You have raised many unanswered questions that I must agree on, may never be answered.
Nicely written. Take Care.