Wow this was far behind what words can express,

Even the oceans gone dry,
My love will never die,

you know this was the best lines i ever read in poetry. you have said what i feel in ur this poem as you know my story,lol.
and honestly this poem almost made me cry for being so touchy, i could relate to every word of it, and then it touched me more the way it ended
Here are my shoulders to cry,
And I can die, just to see your smile

exellent job sir

Wow thats some love, the first stanza was my favorite 5/5

First and fore most i didn't know that u are a filipino too and i was shocked to see ur profile..well anyway, this was really sweet.Like it so much..KEEP IT UP!!!

This is some choice work uv done here:D keep up the gr8 writes..
loved it
5/5
bree