Wow i can very well relate to this poem 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Omg ur poem was a top job all the way

Wow i really liked this poem couldnt of written it any better 5/5 keep up the great work

I like the simplicity yet it has a deepness underneath it and I love the haunting quality that you've captured so well here. Very well written. Excellent piece.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Very well written. i liked it alot. keep up the good work. =]

Powerful write, with an eerie read! Great job.