Thats a good poem and i like the emotion xxx

This is really good. I really enjoy reading your poems. They are very good. Email me sometime at lilmonkee07@yahoo.com.
I'd love to chat with you, you seem like a nice guy. ~Neely~

This is really really good, and in such a different style to your other pieces, but it is so powerful and as i read it i had a tear forming in my eye it was that good!!!
this is so full of emotion and you have made the reader really feel what is goin on
great stuff!!!
5/5
- ali x