Warped

by fvalconbridge   Jul 6, 2007


I hate you, I love you,
I can't live without you,
Your voice gives me shivers,
You love makes me twisted.

Your touch makes me cringe.
But makes me sprout wings,
I hate you, I love you,
I'd die without those things.

Let my time stutter,
Because I can see through your past,
And let my mind wonder,
Through your dark and ghostly path.

Let my time slow,
I'm warped at the sight,
Bringing motion to the flow,
And search for the light.

I'm uncovering the secrets,
And I can see in your dark,
And it's in your pills that you keep,
And it's trickling from your heart.

I hate you, I love you,
And although this is all new,
I hate you, I love you,
And I know the truth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    -Your voice gives me shivers,
    You love makes me twisted.-
    as if it was cold, and painful .

    -Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings-
    she is really both, kinda lost in between. love the image given there.

    --I hate you, I love you,-- repeating it, really brings out the confusion, and the emotion through the poem n_n

    the ending really thought up.
    anyways lol loved it n_n very nice poem
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    My favorite part is this :
    Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings,
    I hate you, I love you,
    I'd die without those things.

    Such amaizeing writeing i love your flow! very good expression, i can begin to feel the emotion. 5/5 nicely done!
    -Marina

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is a great poem and I would consider this as a unique one. 5/5 all the way for the beautiful wordings :)

    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, great poem! You are so talented!
    Whole poem is amazing, I like the topic and the choice of words in it. The flow is very good too.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings,
    I hate you, I love you,
    I'd die without those things.-
    Truly well done, this piece is excellently written.
    5/5 from me

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