by Roxiee An Jul 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The temperature was high what a scorching heat |
Nice poem girl!!! Full of mystery!!! |
Wow, wow... greatly written piece, with so vivid and powerful descriptions through it and very good choice of words. The second stanza is my favorite. I like the flow of the whole piece, too. |
Wow i loved it and the description seasons 5/5 for sure |
:) nice job, good poem... 5/5 (nice use of metaphor, by the way) |
Lovee-stunning storyy x3 |