by ABake Jul 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Been with others, |
by lisa
Beautiful poem!!!really enjoyed it ,well done |
by Wallace
A nice poem, very clear and easy to relate to. You should pay a little more attention to your syllable count per line, cuz sometimes the flow was off. But it was a nice poem, I liked that repetitive stanza you ended it with, great job. |