by ABake Jul 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This morning she woke up to find a tear stained pillow. |
by Miu
Ehhh! Brilliant. I loved the ending, I was thinking of it middle of the poem, if it was yourself you are writing about, and you were. I can relate to this, so it just touched me. It flowed really good and easy to read, so the reader gets your message. |
Thiss very good. |
by Blood Angel
This poem is very well written if that alone could describe it. It's filled with emotion and feeling, perhaps one of the best poems I've read. |
by aDORKable x3
Wow, the ending really caught me by suprise. I wasn't expecting to find out that that girl is you. You did a great job with this one and I'm reallyliking your work. :) |
by Marc Ortiz
This is my favorite out of the three =) You have a good vocab in this poem, well done. I can't see anything wrong about this poem. Good job! It flowed nicely too. |