Ooo... I love it.
Very sad & emotional poem. && I loved the way that you ended it... sorta with a twist. Wonderful job. :] 5.5

- Steph <3

I love it...i definately know the feeling. great job

Yer i really enjoyed readin that i felt what you was sayin i loved it :) xx

I like this one a lot i think a lot of people could relate to this one its very sad and emotional and i love the ending...

P.S Thanks for commenting mine...

This is my favorite out of the three =) You have a good vocab in this poem, well done. I can't see anything wrong about this poem. Good job! It flowed nicely too.

Keep up the good work!

Wow, the ending really caught me by suprise. I wasn't expecting to find out that that girl is you. You did a great job with this one and I'm reallyliking your work. :)
5/5
Ciao<3

This poem is very well written if that alone could describe it. It's filled with emotion and feeling, perhaps one of the best poems I've read.
Keep up the good work.
~BloodAngel

Thiss very good.
but i don't understand
why your unhappy??
5/5

Ehhh! Brilliant. I loved the ending, I was thinking of it middle of the poem, if it was yourself you are writing about, and you were. I can relate to this, so it just touched me. It flowed really good and easy to read, so the reader gets your message.
5/5 Amazing work on this one.