by Beautiful Disaster Jul 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A slash of the wrist to get me by |
by Valerie
I really like this poem! Sad but yet very good. Keep up the good work :D |
One of my favorite types of poems are those that begin and end with the same lines. This one is no different. The pain this piece shows is immense. A great job at making the readers feel this pain in such a short poem. Great job again! |
by Lady Nik
I can relate to this. I think you did a good job of expressing your pain. I love the imagery too. Nice work. Nik |
by HidinVictim
I really like this poem... good job 5/5 |
by Nix
Very good poem. It is sad and greatly written. This peace is short but still very powerful. |