I love this poem
it's so sad
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but icould relate
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Wow! it's just amazing! i lov it! hope u are better =) it's kind that i feel indentified with it, thanks for writing your poem =)

That is a great poem simple but the meaning so strong and the feelings, so complex
girl i hope things get better but this poem was awesome!!! 5/5

laura

Very good poem. It is sad and greatly written. This peace is short but still very powerful.
Well done 5/5

I really like this poem... good job 5/5

I can relate to this. I think you did a good job of expressing your pain. I love the imagery too. Nice work. Nik

One of my favorite types of poems are those that begin and end with the same lines. This one is no different. The pain this piece shows is immense. A great job at making the readers feel this pain in such a short poem. Great job again!

I really like this poem! Sad but yet very good. Keep up the good work :D

5/5