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by BeautifulGwen Jul 6, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / unexplained
The rain pounds against the windows light patters of fingertips Running down the panes are tears and souls of lives lived in the past Their silent voices streak your mind and fill your heart But there's nothing you can do about the fears of lives in the present They just want in... to penetrate your soul
by oddi tea
Wonderful, I love how you ended the poem. "to penetrate your soul" That is my favorite line of all. I love how your poetry flows. Definitely keep writing!