The Ghost Named Love

They named this ghost love,
Because of his undying care and trust,
Even though you cannot see it,
His presence lingers in all of us,
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Loved this part!
Just like the "ghost" we can not see love but it is there deep inside of all of us ...

I can help you see your inner ghost,
Just let me hold your hand,
You will find love,
Sooner then you planned
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This ending is sweet and touching. You have painted a picture in my mind of a man holding out his hand to the one he adores .... pleading "take a chance and grab my hand" "just give us a chance and love will do the rest"

A very enjoyable read ....
Thank you for sharing your words
Luanne

Wow i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yo sereusly did an amasoming job

So i made an exception to my own rules shout me. you have beautiful poems and i wanted to read more. this is just another one
love your poems
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:~)Sam

Awehh, I loved this. I loved the whole overall idea of using a ghost as a symbol for love..makes sense, you can`t see a ghost but you can feel it, technically the same idea with love. So I liked the use of a symbol...it helps to show off your talent a little more. Your lines in your poems are really short, but they`re so full of description so it`s easy for the reader to know what you`re talking about.

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Awwwwwwww!! you are such a cutie!!!
lol hold me!!
this poem is adorible!! seriously... it made me feel loved just reading it :)
good job.. i love it
<3 ang