by KeyxMashingxParody Jul 6, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
As the candles go out, and the moon rises again, |
You had me from the very beginning when the candles went out. great job. |
Lol it does creep me out |
by Fsams
Yeah it crept me out. Your poem is hort and sweet. I enjoyed each and every bit in this piece. Great write with sheer beautiful lines. The repitition has a lucid function. Keep it up. 5/5 all the way |
Creepy, not something i usually read but it was enjoyable.. very well written. keep up the good work though! |