Creepy, not something i usually read but it was enjoyable.. very well written. keep up the good work though!

Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...

^^^ the repitition of this line created a perfect image

Yeah it crept me out. Your poem is hort and sweet. I enjoyed each and every bit in this piece. Great write with sheer beautiful lines. The repitition has a lucid function. Keep it up. 5/5 all the way

Tc
with love
Fsams

Lol it does creep me out

it feels like a short of chant thats going to curse me. the repetition works well if it would to be used much longer however it would probably ruin it. so i think it works being short. well done xoxo

You had me from the very beginning when the candles went out. great job.

your servant:
david