For A Girl

by Loved In Hell   Jul 6, 2007


This poor girl
Has gone through so much
She deserves better
A warmer touch

Why is life so unfair?
How can love be so cruel?
I hope somebody takes care of her
Someone smart and not some fool

Even though she may be
Alone and cold
People love her dearly
As she is often told

I hope she realizes
She is strong on her own
Though people are mean
She won’t always be alone

If there is nothing
To hold onto
I know of one person
That you can trust, you

(coco,I have been in your position before I know you don’t care but I do)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. I like the ending very much, second stanza is still greatest. Powerful atmosphere and subject is good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    I LIKE IT BECAUSE ITS REAL AND ITS HOW U FEEL AND U CARE ENOUGH ABOUT COCO TO WRITE THIS WOW I HOPE MY LOVED ONES LOVE ME LIKE THIS AND MORE BUT I LOVE IT GOOD JOB KEEP IT UP

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I love that you made this poem for Coco! It had so much meaning in it. Even though I don't know everything that she is going through, all I know is that it's really tough. Keep it up, 5/5

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