This is breathtaking, Corinne. Such a beautiful memory you painted, the imagery was exquisite.

"You thought the scene
Would make a wonderful painting
I said a novels worth of words
Could never convey
The meaning of what we beheld"
^^^I adore this stanza.
And the close was as usual, perfect... Great job! ;o)

As I am standing on the shores of Georgia this weekend, I will be thinking of this as I look at the ocean bottomed horizon. Very nice! I won't have a care in the world, with my girl right beside me we will create our own painting in a memory of our scene. :)

I love it!

This left a smile on my face....and makes me remember all the hours I've spent on beaches watching the sun set...
Great job!!

I simply have to admit, this is one of the best poem i have read in long time. I loved the complete poem but the 3 stanza just blew me away, great words indeed.

all the best and take care